surprise
eating caramel
is like eating fall
I don’t try the sweet stuff often
and so had forgotten
its tie to the season
but there it was; I had a
bite—first bite—and fall came
pushing through the taste
I am thankful for the bond
of taste with remembrance
that brought a whole time of
year into the small place here
where I nibble while waiting
for the next thing, after
this, to write or say
October 21, 2015 at 2:45 am
I am really bad at remarks regarding Poetry…. But being honest I do enjoy reading your poetry! A lot I must specify… each time get a mail regarding your poetry, I make sure I don’t miss it.. Coz I don’t know what your next variety maybe! waiting fr more to come every day! 😀
October 21, 2015 at 11:32 am
Thank you for telling me you look forward to what I share. That’s not only complimentary–it’s encouraging. Right now, I’m on a creative tear about fall, because it’s my favorite time of year. But I do use different forms about it, which I hadn’t thought of so much before. Prior to reading your message, I was writing haiku about fall and riddles in the Anglo-Saxon way (which I studied in graduate school). I enjoy your creative work, and I learn from you. Thank you!
October 21, 2015 at 11:41 am
aww I never knew I was an inspiration!
But anyways… have fun writing looking forward to seeing them soon! 😉
October 21, 2015 at 6:24 am
I read it once briefly and found very nostalgic 🙂 I read it again to learn how your imagination is flowing 😀 nostalgic ❤
October 21, 2015 at 12:42 pm
This is a really sweet poem and I especially like your use of simile “eating caramel is like eating fall” and apostrophe “fall came pushing through the taste”. The mood it creates is making me excited for autumn and all things warm and cozy. Keep up the good work!
October 21, 2015 at 5:58 pm
Thanks so much for the encouragement. I’m really glad the poem evoked autumn for you.
October 23, 2015 at 2:07 am
Great poem….. You write more frequently than I do but I blame my laziness
October 23, 2015 at 3:45 am
Thank you! Mostly, I simply keep writing. I don’t know that I have any particular discipline about it.
October 23, 2015 at 3:49 am
Your welcome.
October 24, 2015 at 1:35 am
Great Blog…amazing posts nicely packaged with practical ideas and gems of wisdom! I had to rate this 10/10! Cheers 🙂
October 24, 2015 at 5:57 pm
Goodness, thank you! I’ve enjoyed your writing efforts, too. I don’t think I’ve ever scored ten on anything. A first! Cheers to you, Christopher