Midst
There is no storm just now;
Yet I am between two poles
And, like the compass magnet,
Cannot find a true direction
In the middle and cut off, I
Drift alone—the sun is bright
Though I feel no thirst, no
Longer any hunger, either
I am alone—I don’t know
What happened to the crew—
No storm now and yet I feel
I am only between one
Tempest and another, that
One will come to overturn my
My unsteady craft; so how
Does the Latino saying go?
Your sea is so great, and my
Boat is so small—for the time,
And but for swelling waves,
There is no current bearing
Me away: yet I believe I am
In the midst of all, awaiting
What happens, what catches—
Compelling, never planned
March 2, 2016 at 4:43 am
Is this a non fiction poem? It felt so raw and so real.
March 2, 2016 at 5:19 pm
I’m moved you find it raw and real. The boat part is fictional. I mean, I’ve been on boats and learned how to sail when I was young. I guess I used some of what I know as metaphor for the feelings part. Which is non-fictional. I wrote about what I’ve been feeling lately. In the middle, no movement, wondering what might happen next.
March 3, 2016 at 4:13 am
Oooooh. That is why this one tugs the heartstrings because it is from your heart. I hope you’ll ‘move’ soon. 🙂
March 2, 2016 at 9:12 am
I am blown off!! this is amazing!
March 2, 2016 at 5:14 pm
Goodness, thank you!
March 4, 2016 at 1:17 pm
Welcome!! 😀
March 2, 2016 at 11:00 pm
Love this so much. It is amazingly written. I hope your main character finds which direction he needs to go. It can be difficult being stuck in the middle not knowing as he is.
March 4, 2016 at 4:37 am
And that is the most difficult time, out in the open sea, awaiting to see whether the next wind will be a favoring one or a stormy one.
March 5, 2016 at 4:33 pm
Favoring or stormy. That is the prospect. Thanks.