Seasonings
Winter was hard
Not because I was cold
But impoverished in
Other ways
The white was too much
Too tall, too unusual
For me, anymore
I live in the southern part,
Now, of the state
(Okay, a northern state)
And don’t expect such
Walled-off weather
Often, if at all
It was anxiety; I took
A pill, and pretended
That would be enough
Now spring is here
I wonder which came first:
The verb or the season’s
Name
I could look it up
But I’m not sure that
Would tell me
Ancient stories, after
All, have variants
Winter and summer
Are, as coined by my folk-
Literature teacher,
Hilda Kring—they are
Characternyms
We know what they
Are because value
And form make sound
Thar tell us
But the other two,
Spring and fall, might be
Named for what they
Do—or what we do is named
For what they’ve done,
First and longer
We’ll, I’ll spring
Then you and I, we’ll
Summer (because
We know what
That means), and then
Let’s drop like leaves
Of fall, onto an Earth
Softened by snow
And ice, dew and rain,
And the gentle
Wearying
Of all other
Seasons
(Hilda Kring was a professor of
folklore and folk-literature at
my college, while I was a student
there; she made the term
“characternym” for names of
characters who sounded like what,
in depiction, they were, such
as Uriah Heep in David Copperfield
–and maybe Copperfield
himself; she requested someone
to publish this term for her and to
her credit–and here is my try,
“characternym” from Doctor Hilda Kring)
May 15, 2016 at 12:04 am
I like your poem it’s awesome. 🙂
May 15, 2016 at 4:08 pm
Thank you! Thank you for reading the work!
May 15, 2016 at 12:50 am
WOW–I love it. “Walled off weather” is both aptly phrased, and anxiety-producing. I live in the Pac NW–which used to be known for RAIN, but now it hardly does…much to my disappointment. For me, the intense heat of summer (and this year we broke records for HOT in spring) feels like walled off weather. I think I’m rambling…all to say how much I love your writing 🙂
May 15, 2016 at 4:11 pm
Thank you. I love your responding! Yes, I think intense heat makes its own kind of walls for weather. Either extreme is difficult to live with. My father’s family is in the Northwest–it certainly is (or was) known for rain. Let’s pray for rain for you now! (Just the right amount.)
May 15, 2016 at 11:23 pm
Thanks for those prayers, my friend–yesterday it rained pretty much all day, Hallelujah! Today it’s cloudy, which is still good 🙂 Hasn’t cooled too much, so I’m still running the fans at high speed…but it was cool enough to bake a dessert and start the spaghetti cooking!! Blessings on your day! 🙂
May 16, 2016 at 4:57 pm
I’m delighted to hear that it rained. And it might rain some more (clouds, at least). Sorry the heat prevails. Hmm, spaghetti. I’ll pray for more rain.
May 16, 2016 at 5:42 am
oh my! oh my! what a lovely season-poem this is! Love the wit, (which comes first, spring-noun or spring-verb) and then the melodic and vivid cascade. wow! ❤
May 16, 2016 at 4:55 pm
Goodness, “cascade.” What a fine word to use. And for me (well, the verse). Thank you!
May 17, 2016 at 12:31 am
yeah. 🙂 cascade fits this lovely poem! 🙂 you are most welcome!
May 17, 2016 at 1:08 am
emoji-smiles back (I’ve got to find those emoji things)
May 16, 2016 at 5:46 pm
Christopher, this is an inspiring gesture within an inspiring poem. I love that idea of a characternym. I will have to use it now 🙂
Please have a marvelous week ahead!
Dajena ❤
May 17, 2016 at 12:23 am
Thanks, Dajena. Hilda was a professor for a number of my better college classes. Her husband taught Ed. Psych. and walked around campus with a sword cane that, thankfully, he never had to use as a sword (not even for slicing cheese). They’re both gone now; obviously, they were memorable. Especially Mrs. Dr. Hilda.
Enjoy the week ahead!
Christopher
May 17, 2016 at 12:35 am
There are some people that will always stay with us, and she seems like such a person.
Take care my friend!
Dajena