The Unforgiven
(over three hundred now)
Matthew kills
Two hundred eighty
In the place that Papa
Doc abused
Where the recent
Legacy of earthquake
Leaves homes
Waiting to rise
For five years’ passing
On toward Florida,
This is not
The succession of an
Apostle but the
Random naming of
A storm
That, anonymous,
Would rise and fall,
Slam and flood, beat and
And take the
Breathing from too
Many enfleshed
Fragile souls
October 7, 2016 at 6:48 pm
Your poems have really grown by leaps and bounds. They are always good but you are using more descriptive more varied words, and deeper metaphors and symbolism, to talk about horrific world events. Great job Christopher.
Your post reminds me of a of Metallica songs. Have a listen if you please 🙂 There are parts II and part III of this song on YouTube as well. It’s more an inner battle than one occurring in this world. But then again, I think the world is suppressing him.
https://youtu.be/m-x5JsH4uqE – The Unforgiven I
October 8, 2016 at 1:38 am
Amanda, thanks for your comments and for the comparison–and for the link. I’m delighted for your interaction with the verse!
October 8, 2016 at 2:37 am
You’re welcome
October 9, 2016 at 9:59 am
oh. oh dear. when the wrath of nature was released, humans are allfragile. Great job!
October 9, 2016 at 4:09 pm
Makes me want to say, Stay safe, sister!
October 10, 2016 at 10:08 am
Awww. thank you!