Finite
When we exhale
Things go out
We no longer need,
Which is all right because
Parts of the world need them
That, in turn, give up what
We need
And so inhale
To say the least, it’s a good arrangement
We should keep it going
Oxygen doesn’t come from
An artificial tube
We borrow it
And sometimes
Too often, really
Don’t give anything back for it
Let’s not begrudge astronauts
Someday maybe
We’ll make our own sustenance
For breathing
Though really everything we have
Is borrowed, molecules from
Someone else
Call it Mother Nature
Father Time
Or random, hexagonal arrangements
In the universe
Finally, it’s what we’re lent
Of substance and of time with
The energy to use them
C L Couch
Photo by Moses Lee on Unsplash
Comet NEOWISE over Iona Beach through tall grass.
August 3, 2020 at 4:40 pm
An interesting piece on breathing, it’s importance, and perhaps our shared responsibility to keep a world of oxygen needed to breath healthy — and also that. We all share in this process. How are you doing Christopher?
August 7, 2020 at 9:51 pm
Hi, Amanda! I’m doing all right, no symptoms of the virus, thankfully. I mean, I did have them but chalked it up to a sinus infection. The doctor agreed (over the phone), and I got some antibiotics that did what they’re supposed to do. How are you? Has your summer gone well?
Thanks for your response about the poem. I think for many breathing becomes part of a thoughtful or meditative process, which is really good. But I got to wondering about oxygen as a finite substance on Earth and how our artificial processes that harm nature break up the exchange between our providing carbon dioxide to plants and their returning oxygen to us. It would be worthwhile to keep that exchange intact and reverse the damage that we’ve caused.
August 8, 2020 at 4:41 am
It’s an interesting thought. Reversing the process and giving back. Today I just thank God, I (we) breath & that we live in a world of trees & beauty. I’m ok. Having some tough times, but I’ll get through. Trying to get back on my feet & I suck at it.
Nice weather and the hockey was nice, but oilers are out now, Chicago won ;( But, we’re still,a hub city and they’re other Canadian teams and Pittsburg too I think to cheer for hockey wise (so weird it’s in August).
Take care of yourself my friend. Get outside and enjoy the nice weather w/ some cold tea.
August 8, 2020 at 8:51 pm
I’m sorry to hear you’re struggling. Coming back can be tough for you, I know. Sorry about the hockey team (which I trust is not impeding your health). I’d cheer for the Penguins, but then I grew up in Pittsburgh.
Seriously, I hope that your feeling better continues and maybe goes a little faster. Be well, my friend, then stay there!
August 3, 2020 at 7:17 pm
Inhale positive thoughts, exhale negative thoughts. Relax, concentrate on the breath, in, out, in, out, in, out. Your posts are so relaxing and meditative, Christopher.
August 7, 2020 at 9:52 pm
Thanks, Len, I’m glad you react that way to the posts.
Out goes the bad air, in comes the good. I think that’s from a cartoon.
August 3, 2020 at 8:45 pm
All in nature is interdependent in some way. We need to do a better job
of remembering that.
August 7, 2020 at 9:53 pm
Yes, thank you, I absolutely agree! Nature relies on transactions all around.
August 8, 2020 at 9:58 am
you are wise and really wise that sometimes i hope i have even just 5% of your wisdom. in simple words you can create so much weight. your words have power, brother.
these lines are pure genius:
Oxygen doesn’t come from
An artificial tube
We borrow it
August 8, 2020 at 8:57 pm
Goodness, thank you, sister! I’m happy you like those lines. I was thinking about the people who are asked, Where does meat come from?, and answer, Meat comes from the grocery store. Never thinking (knowing) about the animals. So I made the comparison with oxygen.
With each line, your strength in poetry grows. It’s wonderful to read.
August 10, 2020 at 5:33 am
That’s thoughtful way of conveying this message brother. Sometimes we are really clueless and ungrateful.
Thank you, brother. Happy to have you here.