(x = space)
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Let Me Tell You about My Day
(first hour or so)
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Pre-dawn
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Blue
And if you look into it,
A promise of silver
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In a while,
The mourning doves might call
Take over for the cardinals
And the robins
Who might be louder elsewhere
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The doves
Sing us into green
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Town noise might subsume
The outside sounds
(except the doves who
are right against the window)
Except that it is Sunday
So the morning
Should be
Relatively quiet
For nature’s sentineling
And mine
We’ll find out
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As for other senses,
Touch and smell and taste
Should have their turns
You might
Guess at the prospects
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There’s still a war
Two wars, three wats
Still a virus
Many viruses
People will die today
And people will be born into
Air-breathing life
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I’m a little late
Proposing all of this
Because the coffee cup
Slipped from my hand
And all the coffee
Slid
Down the down the
Sides of everything,
Flat surfaces
And cushioned
(a play of surface tension
and of gravity),
To land upon the floor,
Most of it
Slight sweet
More creamy than sweet
An expensive brand
Though not a kind
More dear
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So I took time to
Clean the mess:
To clear out things,
Take things
To the sink
Where I’ll deal with them,
Sponge and paper towels
And cleaner for
The rest, for the floor
Now things have to dry
Then to be
Cleaned again
And there’s more coffee
To take out from
Its machine
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Sigh,
One of those days
And what does that mean?
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I see
The blue
And sense a silver promise
Like new friends
In a scouters’ song
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I reckon now
You’ll have a day to survey
Finally
Of many hours
I’ll look forward to any
Of that story that
Might come my way
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C L Couch
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Before Dawn
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April 3, 2022 at 11:47 am
I like this… a lot.
April 3, 2022 at 11:51 am
Thank you. Whew. My story seems so ordinary that I wonder about telling it, even though that’s how writing works. I hope you’re having a grand day in Eire.
April 3, 2022 at 11:55 am
Being able to write about the ordinary things is perhaps the most meaningful sort of writing, really. You have a gift for it.
April 4, 2022 at 3:10 pm
A collection of wonderful words and a familiar coffee experience. I love looking into the blue to find the silver.
April 4, 2022 at 4:16 pm
Thank you! Your response is extremely encouraging. I’ve had great spills of coffee in the car as well. And the pre-dawn sky is striking.
April 7, 2022 at 7:14 pm
I hope you didn’t miss the sunrise cleaning up the coffee. You notice the details of life.
April 7, 2022 at 9:22 pm
Naturally, you’re right about the details. As I took wet things to the bathroom, I could look out the windows and did notice the deep blue lightening. I’d rather have sat still to enjoy more.
April 8, 2022 at 8:40 am
Hope you get to see the whole thing this morning xx