Life Goes On
The name of a television
Show, I think,
As well as an old saying
And it does—
Life does go on, that is
Like one, unending sentence
Written and read
Throughout the years
An Edgar Poe-like sentence;
He could write a sentence
That would take up a page
And be no less fascinating
For the length and, what
Turned out, the breadth
A single-sentence life,
Broken up with punctuation
A question mark when
There is doubt, an
Exclamation point when
And where
Something needs affirming
Say, a celebration
A period when things must
Stop for a while, tragedy
Or wonder of accomplishment
Today is a comma
A pause
June 19, 2016 at 7:26 pm
Your poems are deep and rich in emotion. Love this!
June 19, 2016 at 7:34 pm
I’m so happy that you’re pleased. Thank you for reading–and responding!
June 20, 2016 at 1:04 am
I really enjoyed the possibility of different outcomes ruled out through punctuation.
The truth that history tends to repeat itself is skillfully folded within the verses.
Sometimes I think, lives are only 6 word stories.. just like those of Hemingway’s..
Blessings to you
Dajena 🙂
June 20, 2016 at 1:10 am
Thank you for seeing skill in this. I greatly appreciate that.
I like the idea of lives as six-word stories. Northrop Frye would like it, too, though he’d say it’s pretty much the same six words. I do admire Hemingway’s skill with brevity.
Bless you in this new week. Yours,
Nick Adams
June 20, 2016 at 1:16 am
Ahh, yes, him and mythology obsession.. well, we know who is right 😀
Blessings to you too my friend 🙂
Dajena
June 20, 2016 at 8:27 pm
Awesome poem! ❤
June 20, 2016 at 8:36 pm
Thanks for responding!
June 20, 2016 at 8:39 pm
You are welcome 🙂