Amihan
(in Philippine, northeast wind)
Where I live,
When the weather
Comes from the east,
An unusual day
Arrives with it
Different time is allowed,
No value yet, not
Good or bad
Will the air be dense
With drenched nuclei,
Will the sky be sliced:
Will weighted water
Pummel us from above
Then, once cleansed—no,
Purged—and dried
Will we breathe
An ameliorating atmosphere
As a gift from no one
We know how to thank
Valued thus rendered
In innocence
With feet wet
From Eden’s tears,
We tread home
To do our best
To make
A heaven here
Word-High July: Welcome!
Maria of Doodles and Scribbles and I [that’s Rosema at rosemawrites] are more than excited to read your takes on the 30 Beautiful Filipino Words.
- Write or create a post inspired or about the Filipino word prompts.
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July 22, 2016 at 5:14 am
oh dear. the cascade is so soft and so calming as the wind, the last stanza felt like it is soul-embracing. ❤
July 22, 2016 at 4:40 pm
I’m delighted, sister, for the feeling and the way you describe it. As for the wind–well, that comes from, and as, amihan.
July 22, 2016 at 9:39 pm
I think this is one of my favourite pieces so far, the feeling of the weather turning on the whimp of the wind. Lovely!
July 23, 2016 at 9:29 pm
Thank you! Maybe I’m prompted, too, by the current heat wave. Weather’s a big deal, just now. I appreciate your close and thoughtful responses, Sam.
July 22, 2016 at 10:41 pm
Interesting info about your weather in Pittsburg. Love the last stanza the best, doing your best to make what you get a ‘paradise.’ Really great work with the poetry.
July 23, 2016 at 9:31 pm
The current heat wave puts weather high in our consciousness. I’m happy that you like the final stanza. I was thinking, when drafting that part, that something about endurance and hopefulness was needed. Mandi, thank you!
July 23, 2016 at 1:11 am
Beautifully written with such profound meaning. Wow. 💕
July 23, 2016 at 9:33 pm
Thank you, Maria! I’m highly pleased that you’re impressed. You write great praise which, frankly (if vainly), I’m going to enjoy.