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Surly Cat Blues
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SING with me
Cat
Or let me sing with you
Or beat the cans or something
With the alley cats of night
Do you know
Top Cat?
I use to watch
When I was a child
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I’ll call you Surly Cat
To avoid any trouble
And sorry
It’s a surly day
I didn’t sleep much
I’ve had some coffee
Do I want some more?
I am
Debating
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Do you want some
Is that where a
Face comes from
Having caffeine
Or not
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Maybe chocolate
NO
Not for a cat
(or caffeine of any kind
either)
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Maybe Andrew Lang
Painted you
Or Christopher Smart
Elegized
As with Jeoffry
But I imagine you
More
A cat
With a guitar
Or base
Plucking
Singing about
Mouse
The adversary
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I don’t know
You might be a good cat
Avoiding
Everyone
Eschewing toys
Lousy on laps
Except as a surprise
A time of your own choosing
Interest
Combined with
Human inconvenience
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Now I wonder
HEY
It really does look good
Outside
Temperature is moderate
There is a
Range
Of blue and green
And white and black
And gray
Maybe I could take a walk
You could stay in here
The old glass
Allows for sunlight
You might
Feel
Righter with the
Feline, human
World
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Or hatch new plans
While you’re asleep
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C L Couch
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I don’t know if Kliban invented cats who sing the blues, but I can’t help but imagine the two (cats and blues) in Kliban fashion when I think of cats as characters (all kinds) making music in addition to purr, meow, growl.
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I decided not to cite the famous cat with the famouser face. Too current, too popular. So I made up Surly Cat. It’s mine. You can’t have it. Unless you ask nicely. Imagine a cat with fists and an expression always saying, You should see the other guy.
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Top Cat is an animated cat, the main character in an eponymous cartoon series in the sixties. It was a delight of ours when children to meet the actor who was the voice of Top Cat.
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Photo by Max Simonov on Unsplash
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April 24, 2023 at 8:13 pm
I am old enough to remember Top Cat and Cat in the Hat. Thank you for sharing.
May 4, 2023 at 8:00 pm
Thank you for sharing this creative and poetic post about Surly Cat Blues. Your words paint a vivid picture of a cat with a guitar, singing about their adversary, the mouse. It’s refreshing to read such imaginative and unique content. Keep up the great work!
May 5, 2023 at 3:38 pm
Goodness, thank you so much!
May 11, 2023 at 8:57 am
This is a really interesting and creative poem about a surly cat! I love how you incorporate different ideas and references, from Top Cat to Andrew Lang and Christopher Smart. The imagery is vivid and the rhythm is catchy. Thank you for sharing your work with us!
May 11, 2023 at 5:29 pm
My pleasure. Thank you!
May 20, 2023 at 2:00 am
Your poetic musings about the surly cat and your contemplation of their preferences and characteristics are intriguing. The way you weave together thoughts on music, art, and the enigmatic nature of feline behavior creates a captivating atmosphere. The imagery of the cat with a guitar, singing about its adversarial relationship with the mouse, is quite vivid. Your ponderings about the cat’s independence and selective engagement with humans add depth to the piece. Thank you for sharing this unique and thought-provoking poem.
May 20, 2023 at 7:00 pm
You’re welcome–and thank you!